My short stories

The Spin Of Eternity (Micro Fiction)

The Spin Of Eternity

Day 5: Criminal by Fiona Apple

Enter Zophia: In a shadowy field talking to a group of people.

“I cut myself loose to the phobia of a planting germinated weeds in my mind, should I release myself and trust everything and everyone? I bet that there will never be a single spore of hesitation ready to be reborn on this side of my brain, I begged, I cried, I screamed, but my agonies remained unheard, criminals on criminals, murderers of the soul. I killed each and every feeling I had towards the world so as to be able to be reborn again while creating a new world where all of them would be living in a happy world, without any of you killing and torturing anyone of my kind, your shadows will soon vanish from here.

You were criminals, you soul assassins, but look behind you, look deep into the colour of the night . . . do you see your assassinator?

He is there for you all, ready to leap on your neck and devouring the inside of your guts, you will suffer as I have suffered, you will beg, same as I did, and you will die like I did. No mercy for the pitiless, I saw the inside of your heart—ignominie, hatred alongside its sisters rule your heart, you have to perish, for the good of the human kind.”

A man from the group replied to Zorah.

“Do you think that we will let you get away with these threatening words Zophia! look at you, just a little pretentious stratiotis pretending to be greater than us all, who do you think you are, we shall never let you have the ‘spin of eternity’, it’s not yours and will never be.”

Zorah laughed from the bottom of her lungs after having heard the speech of the man.

“Oh! so now it’s me the ugly and bad in this little scenario, when it was all of you that destroyed ‘Stratiotis land’ and killed so many innocents along your vast carnage, so let’s be clear here, it’s me that dictate the rules now, not you anymore, I will decide who dies and who lives, and I will not rest until I have the ‘spin of eternity’.

Another man spoke.

“Its’s our planet now, it’s us that control the area since a long time, don’t forget that it was your kind that chose us to rule this planet.”

Zophia replied.

“You all have failed in your role, so will you all fall.”


I recently decided to participate in the writing challenge: November Notes hosted on the blog areadingwritr, I found the prompts really interesting as it has for main themes songs.

If ever you are interested in participating in this challenge, here are the rules:

  • Write or post anything inspired by the song (the title, the lyrics, or either). No word count limit. It can also be a photo.
  • Please link back to this post so we can read it.😉
  • Use the hashtag #novembernotes.
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